ext_144669 ([identity profile] neyah444.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] camelot_drabble2012-04-23 04:41 pm

Promises

Author: [livejournal.com profile] neyah444
Title: Promises
Rating: PG
Pairing/s: Merlin/Arthur
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur
Summary: Promises they cannot keep
Warnings: unbeta'd
Word Count: 100
Prompt: #3: scars
Author's notes: Thank you for all the lovely comments on 'Flames', I hope you'll also like this one. I didn’t want to post this, because I don’t like it personally, but I thought what the hell. The style I used here is totally strange for me, never used it before, I can only hope I could make it work. I can't say I'm totally satisfied with it, but here it goes.



Promises


’I’m happy to be your servant, till the day I die.’ Tied by fate.

„…for the crime of betrayal…” Arthur’s voice booms across the courtyard.

You deceived me for as long as I have known you!

Banishment.

„…leave and never return to Camelot on the penalty of death.”

His lips ghosting Arthur’s chest drawing a soft moan. Bound by love. Forever.

His eyes told everything: ’I don’t ever want to see you again.’

Merlin’s nails dig deep enough to draw blood, he’s sure it’ll leave a scar, cutting deep into the life line of his palm. Destiny written in scars.



[identity profile] hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com 2012-04-23 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ WOW! such emotion in so few words and not to sound redunant but I loved the way it flowed
♥ This was so heartbreaking.
♥ I'm so glad you posted this.
Edited 2012-04-23 22:29 (UTC)

[identity profile] hogwartsvixxxen.livejournal.com 2012-04-23 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ :) *hugs*