Well that was certainly an excellent use of the prompt. I would be quite shocked myself if I saw my manservant getting it on with a duplication of myself.
But oh wow, this was lovely. I love how you can just feel Arthur's emotions--all of the possessiveness and longing and hurt, along with concern and the little spark jealously that flares. I also love Merlin and his emotions, how Arthur is, and literally (so he says) everything to him. I can just see the love in his eyes, the utter adoration that he feels--and it's pretty heartwarming at that. I like the magic reveal, too, and I adore magic reveal fics where Arthur already knows--they're actually my favorite. But this was absolutely wonderful, and brilliant in it's own perfect way. <3
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Date: 2013-10-01 10:11 pm (UTC)But oh wow, this was lovely. I love how you can just feel Arthur's emotions--all of the possessiveness and longing and hurt, along with concern and the little spark jealously that flares. I also love Merlin and his emotions, how Arthur is, and literally (so he says) everything to him. I can just see the love in his eyes, the utter adoration that he feels--and it's pretty heartwarming at that. I like the magic reveal, too, and I adore magic reveal fics where Arthur already knows--they're actually my favorite. But this was absolutely wonderful, and brilliant in it's own perfect way. <3