Vulnerable
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Author: neyah444
Title: Vulnerable
Rating: G
Pairing/s: none
Character/s: Kilgharrah
Summary: Feelings a dragon shouldn’t know at all
Warnings: unbeta'd
Word Count: 100
Prompt: #3: scars
Vulnerable
He scratched his chest idly, a scar where a tiny scale was missing. It shouldn’t make a difference on a giant creature like him, but Merlin’s ’petty magic’ left him defenseless there, and Arthur had just been lucky enough to hit the same spot. Those scales were his armour, and now he had an Achilles’ heel. He wouldn’t show it to anyone, he liked to keep up the undefeatable appearance, but Merlin made him vulnerable, in more ways than one. It made him uneasy and that didn’t sit well with him. They were feelings a dragon shouldn’t know at all.
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Date: 2012-04-24 02:07 pm (UTC)Nicely done love!
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Date: 2012-04-24 02:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-24 02:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-24 02:12 pm (UTC)Thanks very much. And I love you avatar for this comment.:D
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Date: 2012-04-24 02:16 pm (UTC)I have a hard time with his voice, but I get very excited when I can write about dragons:) I think that sometimes less is more. There are fewer constraints when we write about Kilgharrah.
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Date: 2012-04-24 02:22 pm (UTC)I love this icon too.
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Date: 2012-04-24 02:29 pm (UTC)A lot of people think the dragon slashes Merlin and Arthur:D
Thanks! I have a thing for dragonspeak. Wanna write that? *please* *looks at you with puppy dog eyes*
WeI need more dragonspeak!fic in this fandom.no subject
Date: 2012-04-24 02:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-24 03:00 pm (UTC)Skip Weeds. It's awful. The rest will give you an idea of what I'm talking about, but really, you should do your own take on it. I just have such a visceral response to it, I'd love to see more in fanfic. More dragons too:)
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Date: 2012-04-24 03:12 pm (UTC)Fulfillment made me smile. Six words...genius. Certainly reminds me of someone who could bring down a government with 'just six words'. ♥
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Date: 2012-04-24 03:22 pm (UTC)Nicely done, darling.
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Date: 2012-04-24 03:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-24 03:33 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-24 03:47 pm (UTC)Sure, looks like a nice comm, I just found it, and I'll post this, and I hope to write more about him in the future. Thanks for telling me about Kilgharraheyrie.
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Date: 2012-04-24 04:22 pm (UTC)You're so welcome - we'll be thrilled to see more work from you over there!
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Date: 2012-04-24 07:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-25 09:12 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-25 06:28 am (UTC)Thank you
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Date: 2012-04-25 09:13 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-04-26 12:42 pm (UTC)and YAY for more Kilgharrah ♥
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Date: 2012-04-25 08:20 am (UTC)You managed to touch my heart with those few words. Nicely done.
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Date: 2012-04-25 09:14 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2012-04-28 06:15 pm (UTC)It must be something, to be an all powerful dragon and then brought to your weakest because of one small and seemingly ordinary creature. It makes the great dragon more 'human' in a way.
I love how you bring that out in your writing. Amazing.
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