[identity profile] archaeologist-d.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] camelot_drabble
Author: [livejournal.com profile] archaeologist_d
Title: More precious than gold
Rating: Gen
Pairing/s: none
Character/s: Merlin
Summary: It was hard living in Ealdor
Warnings: None
Word Count: 100
Prompt:His
Author's Notes: none

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A peasant in Ealdor didn't have much. A shirt, two if he were lucky, a coat patched and worn, neckerchiefs made from castoffs, boots cobbled together more with hope than actual hide.

A life filled with cold nights, days spent in desperation. Drafty huts. The fear of rain too soon or not at all and crops rotting in the fields. Hunting for rats and elusive fish in the streams and sometimes, always, hunger lurking there, an old, implacable enemy.

Bandits and the king's taxes and wolves howling in the hills.

But Merlin possessed one thing more precious than gold.

Magic.

Date: 2013-03-12 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 47eleven.livejournal.com
What a great drabble

Date: 2013-03-12 05:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rotrude.livejournal.com
Loved this look at pre Camelot MerliN!

Date: 2013-03-12 05:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] issy5209.livejournal.com
I love the way you have Merlin look at his magic like this

Date: 2013-03-12 06:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bunnysworld.livejournal.com
Oh, I really like that!That's a unique things that is only his.

Date: 2013-03-12 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com
This is an excellent drabble. You painted a vivid picture of a peasant's difficult life and I like how Merlin sees his magic.

Date: 2013-03-12 07:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] afleur-de-lis.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed this! I really loved how you brought Merlin's life before Camelot to life because his humble beginnings would have been hard.

However, I really loved how you showed that despite all the pain and misery that Merlin went through before he left Ealdor, that there was one thing that he found that made things bearable for him and that was his magic.

Date: 2013-03-13 05:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawgoddess.livejournal.com
Lovely. Very effective use of the drabble format.

Date: 2013-03-13 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dante-s-hell.livejournal.com
Awesome drabble. So much with so little words.

Date: 2013-03-22 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] weepingwillow9.livejournal.com
Oooh, this is so good! Sounds like you're about to launch into tales of Merlin and Will's escapades :P

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